Hmm? What is this!!!???
Most of the animation you state the obvious, and in the remainder of the time, your acting as a hypocrite as this video is exactly what you're talking about.
1. Poor voice acting.
2. Poor sound quality.
3. Constant swearing.
4. Repeated references, then usage of anime, video game characters etc...
I couldn't tell the difference between how crappy the NG users you spoke of, and your animations... I know they were all animated by you, but when you're giving an example of bad animation, at least show some contrast.
Overall, this video was a waste of my time, but obviously tons of people like it, so who the hell am I?
I think you did a great job for a beginner... keep it up!
Keep it up...
Though you will grow up and look back on this movie with a little shame, it shows a huge amount of potential. I think whoever animated it has a lot going for them (asuming they are under the age of 15) keep up the promising work, and continue to post on Newgrounds, I like what you're doing, you could be [gasps] Great some day.
You Rock! That was so awesome.
It was kinda dull until the friend smacked the lazy guy on the back of the head... then I just laughed... and laughed... and...
Did you really hit eachother? It looks kind of painful... so if you did, ouch, and if you didn't KUDOS on the ACTING!
More Moving Parts Next Time ~
I really wanted more out of this... you had a few cool parts, but most of it was just random scribbles... the music was also kind of bad, not only in a selection stand-point --- but the singer... kind of weak, and they need to speak up a bit more.
Overall though, it shows potential, never give up, keep working at it ok?
I really liked it despite the drug reference...
This movie was extremely interesting & innovative... good job, it's one of the best I've seen on Newgrounds. Please, by all means, keep making these types of movies...
The clip kinda made me feel like I was dipping into a different world... You've given us some serious art... Thanks for sharing.
It's a Good Clip, But The Sound Needs A Lot More
The sound effects were extremely awkward in this clip, and were generally begging for a little supportive noise. Next time, consider adding a consistent sound to make the random add on sounds less awkward...
But overall, it wasn't a bad movie, you should definitely make more in the future.
I love it, GOOD JOB!
Your animation rocks! I love what you've done, and I beg of you to make plenty more in the future.
You've done a great thing... ignore the others.
I really appreciate you posting this flash movie, it promotes a powerful message, a good feeling --- despite all the darkness, it encourages an overall positive feeling.
I'm not going to look at any of the empty on this one... good job, please, keep making videos like this... maybe next time with less music and more coversation, but if you'd rather continue using music, that's completely fine.
Thanks for contributing.
I'm so glad that my message has come through to alot of people! :) You're totally right about the fact that the 'moral' of the story is a positive thought, even though at first, it may seem that this movie only contains sadness.
Oh and btw, for my next flashes I was indeed thinking of using less music.
I will keep using music to support emotional parts, but only fragments from songs.
Using a whole song forces you to make the flash just as long as the song and the choises for a storyline become very limited. I don't want that anymore.
Thanks alot for shearing your opinion like this, I really appreciate it! :)
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